XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Midnight]

Pretty awsome

~~REVIEW~~
Very nice and deep {BLUES} of color blues and whites seem to always comeout best like this i like the moon you have in view, now with the moon you could have it have a more {GLOW} effect maybe even some aura around it, but i think it would look much better if you gave it a much more whiter effect as it would look better especially with the blue backrounds, very nice job though, and with what looks like to be the {PLANTS} that was neat and giveing a more just sadow feel, I think you could give the whole art piece one more touch and that might be have someone walking in the sadow form, by the plants maybe on the bottom and such, it would seem fitting like someone walking across the plants with the moonlight in the backround, but anyways, make the moon more bright, and all, but other then that its a pretty good art piece, i look forward to seeing more from you. but anyways untill next time, good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some whiter moon lighting, maybe even some glow around it, also another shadow of a person or something.

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Imacow responds:

Thanks a lot for the review.

[Fractals and Light]

Yeah you get a 9 from me

~~REVIEW~~
Now this one i give a big "WOW" it is truly awsome in color light and not just that but design so you really outdid youself there and presented something really awsome, now it does seem like you put lots of time and effort in this, from what seems like the "WINGS" and the black and grey design is something really neat, now those parts i really liked it has somee much great visuals, so props to you there its "FANTASTIC" Now you know me i tend to find stuff that doesnt seem so fitting, so like i said the top points i said was great, but the stuff at the very bottom kinda doesnt fit i dont know why it just seems off, i bet if you removed the bottom stuff and just had more of the grey and black design like you do at the very top it would be just "PERFECT" because to me everything else is amazing its just that bottom stuff thats doesnt fit, so if you ever do make another version that would be my suggestion of change and improving but for what it is, its pretty awsome stuff, keep up the awsome art making,.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The bottom half bugged me so that would be my main issue as i explained above some changes where its just the grey and black design would make it more fitting

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Shikhs responds:

thanx for the review i would remove the bottom half next time i only added it cuz it couldnt be called fratals and light then.

[Something Different]

Awsome color.

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm wow, now its been sometime since i have seen anything new from you but looks like you really went all out on this, to be honest i dont know if i see anything wrong with this at all, its pretty amazing and has some nice use of "COLOR" and the lighting effects are really presented well, now to me this looks like some sorta god or angel with his arms spreadout and is lokking over someone or people, you can kinda see his head at the way to which gives off this feel, but the beat feature of this one was the color so props on you for bringing out all that fantastic color, i just loved it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe if anything just add more texture of color in the lower left and right sides of the piece but really not needed just something that would really help abit.

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Shikhs responds:

thanx for the review but as far as this ones concerned i do think its perfect

[Mushroom Kingdom Stand-Up 1]

Amusing

~~REVIEW~~
so comics are not my best of things to review, but i will do my best in this one, as for the "CHARACTER" luigi he looks pretty good and glad to see that luigi gets some love, now as for the "COMIC" style thats cool, but i am more of the old sunday comics fan so having it in the long way as you do is ok, but why not have it in "TWO" sections that way you could have more to the comic, but if it were me and this is just my opinion i would rather it go from left to right as in sunday comics and or just newspaper comics do, but enough on that, i would love to see luigis sloth, with more texture in theme so the color could really comeout and shine, and as for the "JOKE" itself, you should work on that, i was abit confused at first but i suppose it was funny, Now dont get me wrong i did get a laugh out of this, just could see it being more funnier, so anyways hope to see more comics like this in the future, for now good luck on your next art piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Made a few suggestions on some ways the window spaces are placed, making it more funny would be nice, and also mentioned some more texture use, other then that it was amusing.

~X~

Iplaygames responds:

thanks a ton. The two panel thing I completely agree on, and am actually considering doing. I realize it wasn't that funny, but it gave me an opportunity to draw Luigi... I probably should do shading too.

Thanks again.

[Hayley]

Very nice drawing

~~REVIEW~~
Wow now here is some good sketching that turned into a really awsome drawing, and a drawing it is with some really nice "LINE-WORK" now as you know i do like to see some "COLOR" but for this one i think adding just a touch of color as i said before, but anyways as for this one i think all you need is your "SIGNATURE" in say like red, it would show the color effort and would also allow the black and white drawing to be as its own focus of art and drawings, now these are just ideas though, I really like your linework, thought some "SHADES" could be up in the bland spot of the hat, maybe it could represent more of wear and tear kinda feel, but anyways, this was a pretty good drawing and i enjoyed reviewing it, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested some color just a touch, but you did explain that in the other art piece, maybe just color the signature or something, maybe even give the whole drawing some sorta "BORDERS/FRAMES" maybe those colud be colored and everything else black and white.

~X~

WetPhyseter responds:

Why do you emphasize particular words? It makes me feel like you're yelling at me.

[Land of the Walking Plants]

Awsome world

~~REVIEW~~
So here is another great piece by you, not my fave but still something pretty awsome, the reason i like this one, is because you have a full landscape with lots of imagination and once again some "CREATIVENESS" about it all, and thats what i like about your style, is the creativeness and you create these worls and color and so on, that really jumpout to me and i hope to others, so really some awsome work there, i would love to see you bring some stuff like this into a more computer art program and really make the colors "SHINE" and really just standout, and even with that you could really amke more detail show off on this, the colors you have now are notbad but, but would be much better and show more detail with photoshop detailing and effects, just something to think about, but i was really impressed with it all, now things to improve on, well i would love to see some people or some other type of civ in this scene living walking or even battling, again just another idea that could show off the world more, anyways good stuff once again i enjoyed it, keep up the good work, and hope to see more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some things like more effects on color with a computer art program, also some extra detail touces with the world you created like another civilsation of some sort.

~X~

Merol responds:

I know It would look more shiny and clean if I use photoshop, but I just don't enjoy doing this kind of stuff using a computer program as much as I do using paper (also, I'm a photoshop noob). But I will give it a shot sometime, I don't know, maybe making the sketch in paper and add color with photoshop or flash.
About the another type of civilization, yeah, maybe it would be pretty cool if there were another species wandering around... actually there already are, if you take a closer look at the river, you will see some fishes.

THANKS A LOT MAN!!!

[Spirals!]

Creative color

~~REVIEW~~
Love the color on this one, you have some pretty good work here as i was looking through your other stuff, this was pretty good, but im one about "COLOR" and here with this one you have put fourth lots of color, if i may ask what did you use to do this, the "TEXTURE" is pretty amazing and i really like this stuff, awsome stuff, and you have a good sense of "CREATIVITY" by creating something that is not exactly anything but it becomes something so awsome with the finished project so really awsome job here i enjoyed it, i would love to see more work from you like this piece its my fave piece of all your work, and you reall put all this color fourth with such creativeness, and thats my fave part of it all, Keep making stuff like this and you will do fine here on NG, but anyways if i can suggest anything on this delightful piece, i think i would say, make it larger ad even more twists and turns, but mostly ad even more color and creativity in designs, it truly is an awsome piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it larger ad more color and more twists and designs, even brighten up the color aswell

~X~

Merol responds:

Hey! Thanks a lot!
I made it with flash, I used the brush, nothing special about it I think.
Actually, I don't use to make lots of draws with flash or another programs, but if I ever make something like this again I will take your recomendations.
THANK YOU!!! (Also, glad you like that thing so much)

[P-Bot Working]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
OK so this was actually pretty good i thought, kinda "CUTE" i could see this being improved thouogh, like you have "P-BOT" just standing there, an idea might be have him working since that is the title, like maybe he has a bag of blams and or saves and he is throwing them into each of its own section, now dont get me wrong this is pretty cool with p-bot standing there, just might show more "ACTION" in this piece if he is really working at something, I think you should have also made him "LARGER" so you could show off more of his detail like more of the color and shades, kinda hard to tell as he is more of a med size, but from what this shows its pretty neat, , maybe you should bring this into photoshop or some computer program and give him and the backrounds some "SHINE-EFFECTS" it would really brighten up colors and such and show a much more well presented p-bot, again just an idea that could improve on this delightful picture, But anyways nice P-bot showing here really enjoyble. keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the canvas much larger alowing more detail of the color and shades, and as mentioned maybe have him working as the tittle says.

~X~

[Post-Industrial Waste]

Really nice drawing here

~~REVIEW~~
Nice line work in this one, especially on the "HAIR" you really have shown me that you can put the effort in with this piece, now im always one for "COLOR" and even "BACKROUNDS" so here you have really showen more of a sketch with some awsome detail in line-work, which really does show off very well, so props to you there, now to me, i dont know what you look like but just seems like the "NOSE" is abit too big?? but anyways really good drawing here, i think it might even be abit better with some added color, maybe you should even do a version with color, and also some sorta backrounds would be nice, maybe a chair or some wall atleast just something that really sets the "SCENE" i think an idea might be to keep the sketch black and white and add a "COLOR" backround, that might be something and still keep focus on the main portrait, I also notice you really like to use lots of shades thats cool too, it really does bringout the detail in your work, so anyways glad i had a chance to view your work and ofcourse review some of it, good luck on any new stuff you got coming out.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some color ofcourse and maybe even a backdrop scene, like a wall and such, i mentioned a few other ideas above.

~X~

WetPhyseter responds:

Oh yeah!?! Well... Your mother. What.

[Little 'topus]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
Here we go something pretty neat here, i just love the drawing and all the tenticles are pretty awsome, there is one thing that is bothering me on this though, thats the "BACKROUND" color its ok, just seems too messy, i think you could have really gone all out on the backround since the main piece is pretty welldone, now back to the backround, it looked like you just used the paintbrush tool and swiped all around, i would have liked to see a more full backround maybe give the "IDEA" that this creature is in the sea with maybe other fish, i think there should not even be any whiteness at all, just mix some "BLUES" and "GREENS" but with much more texture then you have here, now this is notbad i just think more time and effort is needed on the backround portion of this piece, its a pretty neat piece though, so improving on stuff would mainly be the backrounds, and as stated i wouldnt mind seeing more sea life in this piece, just a few ideas that could improve your work, but good luck anyways.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated, more sealife in the backround, but more so on more effort on texture and color to give off that feel of the sea and such.

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WetPhyseter responds:

FOR THE LOVE OF LOVABLE LOVE!
I'm kinda almost certain the background is lacking because my sexy topus is going in with a bunch of other animals in a separate piece.