XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inktober #20 Monsters Ink]

Demonic

Wow this was amazing work, this one right here had some really nice lines. So far here you have really formed some detail in each character or demonic character and I think some extra shades here and even doing a color version would be nice to try out next time around, maybe with blood and hell fire, because the simple all black can not help me focus on one aspect and draws my eye all over the place, but anyways nice job, nice design as always.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color inside the character and hell fire would be nice

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

I think you'll find your feedback fully implemented a few Inktober pieces over. ;) Thanks.

[Inktober #23 Back Blaze]

LOL

well this one here, this one made me laugh and I really did enjoy the simple stick man's expressions of being on fire and "RUNNING". I think the flames themselves were good and the use of the text under it just made it more hilarious. It felt more like a comic panel and that was nice to me. I do find a border would have been more helpful and maybe would have brought this all together in a more comic way. I do think you give solid advice tho, back up your back ups.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some border around this would be nice and make it more like a comic

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

I can actually see that black panel-like border around this one. :) Would be perfect. Glad you got a laugh out of it too (and if you haven't heard of the company they're very much recommended)!

[Inktober #15 A Bowling Baller]

Cool

So here was a cool character really nice original and detailed and new idea to use a bowling ball to be someone's head. You have a very simple and plain yellow background that was very bland besides that cool character and I don't think the brown outfit works with a yellow background since they are so close in hue it seems too similar, but overall this is good and not too bad. I would say I really will remember the character you've created.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background details that is a new color and maybe has shading.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Hmm I think the one color that doesn't really match here is the blue, but good notes!

[It's Over]

Nice art piece

So this is a nice "ART" piece I think if you had added some shadows of other elements it might represent much more, this was some nice artwork here and I really liked it and was some nice detail, theres a alot of blank space in there and that was the intense.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think if you had added some shadows of other elements it might represent much more

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SPLATTERBRAIN responds:

Was gonna put the shadow of a giant hand coming down on him as if to press him out of existence, but I felt it'd be too much

[Tore The Tortoise]

Very nice

So this was really "NICE" this looks so real and realistic the shell the head every bit here is very impressive, that lighting in the backround seems like you could have had some of that shine on shell and maybe spin off a few sparkles or shine or something with lighting effects, anyways some nice work you have presented.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
that lighting in the backround seems like you could have had some of that shine on shell and maybe spin off a few sparkles or shine or something with lighting effects

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Carr77 responds:

Thank you for your comment and suggestions :)

[Inktober Day 21: Inktober]

Amazing work

So this was some amazing work here you have some very deep "LINE-WORK" not just this but all of your work especially all the balck and white sketches the shades and fine lines just come together like water meets the cracks If anything is to be improved all I would suggest maybe one day ad some solor to these or atleast parts of of theme maybe even colored frames and the rest being black and white would be a nifty idea, anyways really nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
If anything is to be improved all I would suggest maybe one day ad some solor to these or atleast parts of of theme maybe even colored frames and the rest being black and white would be a nifty idea

~X~

DrSevenSeizeMD responds:

I added color to a few of them. I use the color to accent things. :-)

[mine octobit 2018]

Very artistic

These are some very "ARTISTIC" pieces of art here you really bring some nice pieces together here, as for a form of improvment maybe you could frame each piece since you are putting them together just an idea though, This was interesting and I actually found this kind of art pretty nifty, you dont actually see this all the time and its always nice to see people making stuff like this as it is creative and stylish. This was pretty neat, shows off some of your skill and shows some even more of the effort put into this, so thats always a plus, you can really tell when someone puts the time in on something and this one shows. So I hope you continue those standards because it does show well. And those are the types of art work I really enjoy reviewing.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as for a form of improvment maybe you could frame each piece since you are putting them together just an idea though

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DenisPopyvanov responds:

thank u so much, i will work about dat)

[T O O L]

Decent

Alright so this was notbad there's a fee things you could possibly do to improve on this though I think the hoody was too large for the portions of the body some added texture would be nice in skin tones and clothing and lastly I think some added facial expressions would be pretty good with more expression and one more thing ad some depth to the background but it was a good start here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned a few things above that may help

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KEINGARRISON responds:

thanks man for all the advices!

[One thing he's never seen]

Really nice work

This was a really nice character and nice form and ofcourse a nice structure, some more added backround details would be nice, I start off this review and its pretty awsome that you can find stuff like this, theres lost to see and admire, and I do enjoy some detail and love that its abit on the artistic side but then again most art is. but anyways keep on doing what you have been doing, Its always nice to see stuff like this, very unique. And now before I head out from this review, Just wanted to say a few words and that would be that keep up this kind of unique style, and I do look forward to more from you in the near future.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some more added backround details would be nice

~X~

Sony-Shock responds:

Ah, thank you very much! I love extense critiques like this!
Funny enough, the biggest flaw always ends being backgrounds... But hey, at least I can say I draw backgrounds a lot more now because of that! This.. happens not to be one, tho. Shame on me >>U

Thanks again! <3

[Nospiratu]

Amazing

wow this was some intense and amazing artwork the lighting effects and the animation itself was welldone, And to end this review, I will comment that I was pleased with all you did here, you created something good here and it was a unique and something differant wich I liked. In a way this was Symbolic, I like the Polish you gave this, and my Overview of this is that you have done something pretty awsome here. And on an ending note you Appropriately pushed the limits on this art piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Dont feel any changes need to be don as this was an awsome piece.

~X~

shadow-ghost responds:

I'm really happy you liked it. Thanks for the review! :)