XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Azuberry (2016)]

Cute and funny

This was cute and made me giggle. I dont think I would eat her, but her hair does look yummy. And you gave it an entertaining value by making me chuckle so I was happy with it very well designed and drawn out. The colors are good and the coloring from line to line is good too. I wish you didn't have so much white space tho, because a lot of white is in your character and that can get lost in the art to the background washing it out. I would add a bit more of the vinagrette style background or a full background here to get rid of as much white space as you can to really make her white details pop and not get lost in translation.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A background to lower the amount of white space

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lukisart responds:

Yeah I am quite afraid of designing backgrounds XD

[Succubus Meloetta]

Cute

Really cute character here love what you did with the "HAIR" here its very flowing and vibrant I think you could ad some more shine to the hair would really have a nice look, I would suggest some backround detail also, but regardless this was a nice character work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you could ad some more shine to the hair would really have a nice look

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ZedrinBot responds:

That doesn't seem like an improvement, just an idea suggestion (I don't think it'd fit with my intentions or would have a solid impact on the piece personally, especially considering this was a commission where the commissioner paid for a set level of detail).

Thanks for the review, though.

[Shadowrun - Suwi]

Wow nice

Now here was something really nice I "LOVE" the this character design and you gave her some nice expression too, wish there was more in the backround but overall this was good, you have presented something really nice here and it was a pleasent piece of art here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
wish there was more in the backround but overall this was good

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MLeth responds:

Thank you! Although I would argue that the lack of a background is a choice (it was not part of the commission) rather than a flaw to improve on.

[Volpina]

Notbad

Well this was notbad I actually like these animals so that was interesting way you made one into a lady. I wonder if you are a fury fan? You have some decent skills with the brush work as you blended from color to color well and kept that animal fur look and a good amount of detail, the only thing I would suggest would be ad some more background details, the green is interesting and draws you to focus on the animals lady but it needs a bit more, or if not, try a border around the entire piece to just balance out your white space. I did like your name above the tail tho, that was a nice way to sign off the art.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a background with more detail or try a border to get more white space off of this, but good job

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lukisart responds:

Thank you for your advice!!!

[Umbra Sunrise]

Wow nice

Wow the lighting effect here was amazing this was like a photo of some sort but was really lifelike you have showcased some amazing work here and I love your direction on this piece and others, I have no imput on any changes to this piece its a solid piece of work, so nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I have no imput on any changes to this piece

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nuFF3 responds:

Thanks.

This was one of the first images I made when I got a hold of a 3d renderer.
Its a super simple scene, with the most basic of things.
Even using the stock lens flare effect that came with the package, haha.

[Looking Glass Sphere]

Wow nice

Wow this was nice not sure how you did this but its a beautiful "SPERE" or "ORB" love the color that comes up in it from the ground piece, I like the shine too but maybe a sharp sparkle comming off that shine, Anyways very nice work here I have enjoyed seeing and reviewing this piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like the shine too but maybe a sharp sparkle comming off that shine

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nuFF3 responds:

Hi

Thanks for the feedback.

I actually remade this piece two years after this was made.
https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/nuff3/looking-glass-sphere-fortune

[Colorful Witch]

Nice color

And here you have some nice use of "COLOR" I really like the rainbow like colors here I think you should brighten them up and maybe even with a glow, And here we have something fresh, something interesting and kind of nifty, there was a good element about this you really know how to bring things together in a good way, and i was pleased with all of what you presented here, making something pretty interesting. So Nice work on this piece of design, I will always enjoy stuff like this and will always look for more stuff like it among the art portal and beyond.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I really like the rainbow like colors here I think you should brighten them up and maybe even with a glow

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Caaath responds:

OMG WOW, thank you for everything and for all the tips to improve it! <3 It was very kind of you!

[Mermaid Me]

Neat

Well notbad at all, and great for a mermaid piece. I see that this one had all the elements like decent characters and whatnot, but the detail in the tail was the best part in terms of effects and style, and great drawing of ocean life aswell. I love the use of lighting in this aswell, you've got ocean underwater light down pretty well, in the future you may find me reviewing your work alot, so hope to see much more soon...

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Most-High-Studios responds:

Thank you very much for your review! I'm always looking for feedback.

[purple]

Very welldone

And this was very welldone, love the character design here and i love the backround detail very nice indeed, You bring some good Insight to this piece and you have Captured some interesting visual ideas here, So this one here is pretty awsome, this piece really caught my eye, I like your deep style of detail and what not, it really came out well. I am most impressed with this, But Before I start saying anything the first thing I noticed on here is that it really jumps out at you with a nice unique style, you really do have the skills for great stuff such as this piece, Now that I have that out of the way I have to say you did an impressive job here actually.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Didnt find any changes needed you have presented a beautifull piece of art here.

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cashumeru responds:

you had me expecting some big overarching flaw i might've missed lol, thanks wayne!

[Scrab remake]

Notbad

I think this is pretty good, but something seems off about it....Not the design or concept but the image itself seems blurred and overworked in certain areas. I think it needs bit of a sharpen and some shading needs to be done. I do like this piece. I like the flow of the scrab into the background very smooth there throwing in some neveda type sceneary was a nice touch. Good effort all around but why does it have abs?

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just sharpen this one up a bit.

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Zelgeist responds:

Thank you for a insightful feedback. I appreciate it very much.

It has abs because its torso is supposed to be very human-like. Not utterly like human, but pretty close.