XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Guess whats in the briefcase]

This was differant

Yeah i must say this was differant but i really like it, i love the randomness of it. allthough color would have been nice even if it was just in the backrounds or something, would have been a plus there, maybe even some sort of solid backround colored while keeping with the black and white backround something to think about in anycase this was pretty good unique and differant as i like, or if you dont want to color other parts maybe have the briefcase colored with the question mark glowing. But other then that this was pretty good i thought, keep up the good art pices here, i look forward to more..

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First of all i love this very random and unique, color would have been nice even if it was just in the backrounds or something, would have been a plus there, maybe even some sort of solid backround colored while keeping with the black and white backround, or if you dont want to color other parts maybe have the briefcase colored with the question mark glowing. try some of these ideas it may help to bring it out more.

[Violet]

Nice color sheme

I really like the color use here even with the eyes it really popped out with the great color and one of my faves i must say, the backround was dark but that was ok as it was more focus on the drawing and color itself, so that was pretty nice, very good drawing and great texture, this was a great piece here and i will make this one one of my faves as i love it, if anything can be improved i might suggest some lighter balance but other then that it was pretty good and was really impressed with it, anyways nice work and great effort. anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighter backround would be nice but overall it was pretty good.

[Smiling-Sad-Screaming]

I like the differant views

So I like the differant views on this one like sad, smiling and screaming so nice job, there, i was not too fond of the black and white style though, could use more color or just a touch of color like just having the eyes are another spot in each frame with some sorta color would give that area more focus, and also maybe focusing more on the three differant emotions at the same time, just an idea, to make it better, but regardless you have a nice edea here with the emotions and such great drawing nice shades and good design here, keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well as mentioned some touches of color wouldnt hurt and might help focus more on the emotion idea you started with.

[Affect Flash August 2008 cover]

Wow very nice

Wow this was pretty nice, it has a whole artistic feel of it all, and such i love how you used all sorts of colors and stuff, the amount of colors is amazing and how you blended and brought it all together, so nice job indeed, and great job on the "EYES" they are really looking at the viewer and i think its pretty neat how you made that come all together, so that was a plus there, great texture great use of color and really made this art piece just pop out at us so awsome job there and i look forward to seeing much more especially if its like this, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So to be honest i liked this how it was i wouldnt touch a thing, its very well balanced and artistic, keep up the good work.

[Abomination]

Nice drawing

Ok so this was a nice drawing reallyjumped out at me and has a nice style some great shading, wish there was more with the backrounds though but for the mostpart its a pretty good drawing, very good and fine detail, maybe add some sort of color and some sort of something in the backround, even some sort of colored backround somehow. but anyways everything was pretty good just add more too it as suggested some backrounds and a touch of color, but anyways decent work here and was glad i had a chance to check it out, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some light images in the distance, and a touch of color would be a plus, anyways keep up the nice work.

[3D Mindchamber]

Nice design here

Very nice design here, everything is pretty good here, seems like you could have added some more "SHINE" with the medal and all, also maybe some of the lights could also have abit mmore glow aswell, and on his right hand almost seems like he should beholding asword or something, and not to be a sticklar, but maybe addinsg something in the backround would help also maybe some sci-fi world or other robots of some sort, just a thought here or there, but for the mostpart it was pretty neat and nice design, and very good effort here, anyways keep up the awsome work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some suggestions were made above but for the mostpart it was pretty good, i suggested some more shine, more glow and maybe some more props.

~~OVERALL~~
A good design, very pro.

[1]

abit on the strange side

This was abit on the strange side but i must admit i like it and you get some creativity points for going beyond the normal, wich is always a plus, the face and beak cameout well with a realistic and random look, even did very well with the backrounds to reflect well off themain face character, and the eyes were something strange aswell, now i love this style of random and strange, so with that you made something of interest then went beyond, so nice job there indeed, Keep up the fantastic artwork, cant wait to see more stuff like this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think it was pretty good as is if you ask me, everything was fantastic.

[Super Show]

LOL Something differant

OK so i was not expecting this big oversized mario but then it kind of grew on me and this was amusing, not sure if that was the idea but if so maybe some ground "IMPRINTS" would work here just for that extra addedhumor, but as for the rest it cameout pretty good i thought, nice drawing very realistic to mario so you did well there, the font of super mario could have been somewhat more fancy but for the most part this was actually alright, i enjoyed it, one last touch up tip might be the box maybe abit more shine but thats just me, anyways good work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So i suggested a few things with some tips, some imprints, some shine on the box, etc it was all pretty good though.

["In the final hour...]

Nice

Very nice with this one, the limited colors are ok with me, but still would have been nice to see some other vibrant colors aswell, but anyways like what you did with the code and all, and not sure what this is all about but it was pretty impressive on its own and cameout very well i thought, maybe as a tip the backround could be more cloudy and or dusky like givingmore of a dark feel to it all abit more, just an idea though, but other then that this was actually pretty good and i can see why it was front paged so congrats there, anyways nice work i liked it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more cloudy and dusky look from the backround would be nice and maybe one more color of code wouldnt hurt either.

[My Eyeball Fell Out]

Decent eyeball

eyeballs are always pretty cool, i love this one nice colors infact you useing alot of lighting colors too, and with the black backround that really brings out the lighting effects on this one, i especially like the use pf purple under the eye, the actual white portion of the eyeball was good shading aswell, so this whole piece had alot of "RICH" colors and good shading, so as for making this better, maybe some design in the backround, still keeping the black but with some sorta design to it. anyways nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as mentioned as above the backround, some design in the backround, still keeping the black but with some sorta design to it.